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PostSubject: Chapter 3 is done   Sun Aug 22, 2010 4:31 pm

Hi,
everyone, chapter three is done, and NO, Viraden your guy was not put into it yet. It just wasn't the time. So i hope you all love the new chapter. Now, i am not a professional writer, but please leave your feedback here.

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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 3 is done   Sun Aug 22, 2010 7:20 pm

It was awesome I like the idea of you poting Ragouls in it cheers

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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 3 is done   Sun Aug 22, 2010 7:22 pm

thanks, i don't know what reminded me of it, but really, how could i write about taris and not put the Rakgouls in it...

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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 3 is done   Sun Aug 22, 2010 8:22 pm

i liked it good chp.
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 3 is done   Sun Aug 22, 2010 9:00 pm

one thing real quick Nelson... you do realize TK-421 is from the origial movies... now was that on perpose or did you not know?
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 3 is done   Sun Aug 22, 2010 9:51 pm

Okay so I read the chapter... Nice... I like it... it works... but its repetitive... but I like it alot... Keep it up Nelson... you'll be a hell of a writer yet...
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 3 is done   Sun Aug 22, 2010 10:22 pm

of course i know that...lol. He was in the first movie, and was a stormtrooper, it was the one Luke posed as. I put that in their deliberately. I am glad you noticed that. It is one of my favorite parts in the movie, and i really don't know why...

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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 3 is done   Sun Aug 22, 2010 10:27 pm

Awesome... Star Wars shout out to someone who was born more then 3000 years after your story like... Dude you really do rock man...
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 3 is done   Sun Aug 22, 2010 10:31 pm

thanks...that means a lot...lol

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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 3 is done   Sun Aug 22, 2010 10:35 pm

Lol... I bet... I can't wait for chapter 4...
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 3 is done   Sun Aug 22, 2010 10:36 pm

yeah, I have no idea when i might start writing it...

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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 3 is done   Sun Aug 22, 2010 10:43 pm

Its okay we're patiant...
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